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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:18 PM


A candle burns at both ends,
fire racing flame,
my mind is cluttered,
full of empty lies,
all your answers sound the same.

I don't know what to think,
too much is on my mind,
nothing seems the way it should be,
and I'm running out of time.

The wick is disappearing,
someone please tell me what to do,
my mind tell me it's over,
but my heart knows,
I'm still missing you.



© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-06-06 12:48 PM


God how I miss someone too.
this brings out that feeling.

a great poem kid.
keep it up.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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