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Portia
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since 05-18-2000
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0 posted 06-05-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Portia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Portia

...it's a thing you can't describe
have you been there?

have more tea.

the thing is, you reach a point where...
a decision must be made.
love is an act.
it's not an EVENT that happens to you
it's not a PARTY you are invited to
it's a VERB you must take part in.
and if you don't take part, then...

cookie?

well then, you lose your place.
*chuckle*
and let me tell you, dear, losing your place
is not a good thing in this day and age

oh take a mint, child.

when you get to my age,
you wear your purple hat
you have your tea and cookies
you learn to love your
love

and oh, if these walls could talk
they would tell a tale
of a passion, a desire, a darkness...

*chuckle*

but you don't want to hear about that.

have another cookie, dear.

and go after your darkness.
It will do you good.
© Copyright 2000 Portia - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
Angels Camp


1 posted 06-05-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

I love it kid. haha
and welcome to Dark Passions,
this is refreshing a different view, great.
it's like I'm sitting down at an old aunt's house. haha, and she is telling me of the world, and life. I look forward to more.

this gets a hhhhhhhhhoooooooowwwwwwwwllllllll... hahaha
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 895
saarbruecken, Germany


2 posted 06-05-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

This is a great monolgue. Really original and real.
Jana Tovey
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since 05-30-2000
Posts 257
USA


3 posted 06-05-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

This is very wity...sounds like the queen, eg. the purple hat.  Loved it!!
Dark Enchantress
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since 07-27-99
Posts 1460
meet Morgana


4 posted 06-05-2000 10:04 AM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Welcome to Dark Passions Portia!
This is most definately a wonderful start for you....I loved this! I hope to see more from you soon.


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~


a-alibaster
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since 01-08-2000
Posts 399


5 posted 06-05-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for a-alibaster   Email a-alibaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a-alibaster's Home Page   View IP for a-alibaster

Welcome to Passions. I truly found this enchanting...reminded me of my grandmother sitting on the patio sipping tea and having on of her..."in depth" chats with me...how I miss them!

 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


6 posted 06-06-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Such a neat, neat read.  Welcome here.  I'm a bit late on that but wanted to let you know that I look forward to more of your work. Take care. *Peace.
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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7 posted 07-17-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I am developing a strong affection for your aunt yanno...

another wonderful work - glad I knew where to look for this...

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