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Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19
Posts 115


0 posted 2000-06-04 02:17 PM


Storm

The sound of the rain,
The feel of the thunder,
A storms moving in
A man can’t describe the wonder

The feeling you get
As the sky darkens gray
You know the power the storm
Brings in, as the trees start to sway

As the rain starts to pour
As the lightning begins to flash
You know to run for cover
Before the ceiling starts to crash

As you hide in a corner
You can feel the floor begin to shake
The lightning flashes on the walls
As the tree branches begin to break

The wind starts to swirl
And has the sound of a freight train
As the powers knocked out
You can feel your energy begin to drain

Just when you thought you were through
You decide to open your eyes
As you glance all around
Everything is fine, to your surprise.



 By Necro Draconis

Let nature guide your soul.

© Copyright 2000 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-06-04 09:52 PM


As a general rule I like storms, they remind me of the beauty and awesome power of nature, and of just how fragile we are.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
2 posted 2000-06-05 02:10 PM


This is a wonderful poem!! I adore storms,especially at night....they're thrilling and frightening at the same time....like a roller coaster. I thrive on the chaos!! Great poem!! I like the descriptions,they're great!!

swamp

 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-06 12:25 PM


God I love storms, living on the coast, I'd go down to the beach cliffs during a storm, and ride out the wind on the edge.

Great poem my friend.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-06 02:07 PM


beautiful exquisite enthralling miraculous
nature truly heals sometimes.  thank you for this one.  i love rain wind thunder lightening.  you are gifted.  thank you for sharing.  my soul needs these words.

kynder




  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-06-06 09:19 PM


~Ok,...it was so very cool reading this right now. There's a storm in action where I am right now.  While I was reading I could hear the wind whipping and the rain smacking and so forth.  So it was an added effect to an incredible piece of poetry.  Thank you for a truly great read. *Peace.
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