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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Night It surrounds me It engulfs me It covers me It feels what I feel It sees what I see It knows what I know It is who I am It is beautiful It is peaceful It is night By Necro Draconis Let nature guide your soul. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I can't really say why, but this one grabs me, great work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I like how you write,...I really, really like how you write. Such a short yet powerful poem you have here. I like the style, I like the emotion it's filled with. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Ahhh!! what would a wolf do without the night. I do love it so. Some think it covers and clokes, nay!! It reviels more than ever what a day can. great expression kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I too love the night. This was a great poem. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
ahhh, lovely, lovely! The night, at times, seems to be my only comfort for my own deamons as well as the human race... it is never-ending cold longing sweet salvation! Thank you for a wonderful read that said so much to me in so few but granduously powerful words!!! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
At the opening I was expecting for it to feel claustrophobic or frightening, but I loved the line "It is who I am." This leaves a lot open to the reader, who can interpret it for themselves... well done. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
This poem is so simple and elegant that I wasn't sure how to respond. Portia took the words right out of my mouth. I agree with her completely. |
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