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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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meet Morgana

0 posted 2000-06-02 10:24 PM


Drain away my life,
make it scream and cry
Listen to my heart bleeding,
leaking into my eyes
Never learned to let go,
or even how to let it show
If I break down my walls
will the world understand?
It is for my wounded spirit
that I fear,
and this is why
I hide amongst the shadows


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-06-02 11:08 PM


Hon, how do you know unless you try.  At some stage we all have to let the walls or barriers down, and some will love what they find, other's may not, but you have to do it, you have to live your life and be free to express your emotions as they are integral part of you.  They help make you what you are, and not all emotions and bad or evil.  Give it a go, open yourself, and then you are in effect opening yourself to new horizons and avenues too...
Have courage.......

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
2 posted 2000-06-02 11:13 PM


Break through those barriers!  What do you REALLY have to lose??  Graet poem, short and sweet.  
Dark Enchantress
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Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-06-03 02:29 AM


The sad thing is...I have tried before quite a few times and where has it taken me? No where that I haven't been before. All of my self-expression thrown back in my face. But believe me...I have no fear in expressing my emotions and my mind. If anything that's what I'm all about. I just protect myself from pain that isn't needed and from the people that I know won't understand. Some people just simply can't. But anywayz, thank you both very much....as always it's appreciated.  

 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-06-04 10:06 AM


This touched me, I feel the same way, so much emotion, so many words, and never knowing if anyone will care or understand, or throw it back at you. Sometimes I feel that as I long as I appreciate my own emotion, I am ok, other times, the longing for someone to understand and envelop you in that understanding, is so overwhelming
Thanks for the beautiful expressions. The others you posted here are also wonderful.
Sandra

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
5 posted 2000-06-04 03:30 PM


Thank you very, very much Sandra.   There is always someone that understands but that person is often beyond our own reach. But with any luck we'll find the way.

 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2000-06-04 09:47 PM


It can be a tough thing to do but when you find the one that understands it all becomes worth it.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-06-05 10:12 PM


I seem to jump in with both feet, no fear of the heart, and living life to it's fullest.
Consider?? water in a cup my friend, does not man thirst, but how can you drink of new life, if your cup is full (with fear/walls)
Yes your words/heart will be not fall upon deaf ears, some will scorn/throw it back, but you will reach ears/hearts unseen, opening a world unsafe yes but life to extreme.

Take care.
And with all my rambling, I almost forgot, ahaha.
YOU do have a great way with a pen.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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...in my boxers...
8 posted 2002-03-20 03:36 AM


If I break down my walls
will the world understand?

I know one man who did...

It is for my wounded spirit
that I fear,
and this is why
I hide amongst the shadows

These four lines I loved. It was as if they were one line, merely seperated by space... this is so easily done and felt for all of us. I'm so glad you let me in.

Sincerely,
Mon verite

My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

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