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DarkEnchantress's BF
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-06-02 10:09 PM


The loneliness and sorrow
will linger even worse tommorow
Without the feeling we had I'll always be less
'Cause all I ever cared about was the very best
I remember all the sweet things we used to say
I still remember loving you more day by day
I cherish the memories we shared,
and how some things we never dared
Everything we did meant something special
'Cause to me you were essential
For you I had so much love,
And that love was as pure as a dove
Your smile had always made me feel right
And nothing was better then holding you tight
You meant ever so much to me
You were the only thing I ever cared to see
When I woke up in the morning,
I wished you were there
and when I realized
you might be thinking the same,
there went my care

When I went to sleep at night
snuggling with you I wished,
But all I had at night was
how much it was you I missed
I always remembered all during the day
I wished I could just see you to say hey
I remember waiting 'till you were ready
for our first kiss
And then I remember cherishing it
and thats what I miss
I remember ever so much
how much I really gave you all my care,
And now without you I dont see how I can hardly bare
And with all my love I write this
for you to know
your the one I'll always miss


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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
1 posted 2000-06-02 11:23 PM


This is well written and it speaks volumes.  I like the play on words in the title.


[This message has been edited by Jana Tovey (edited 06-02-2000).]

DarkEnchantress's BF
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 8

2 posted 2000-06-03 03:53 PM


Thankiez Jana




[This message has been edited by DarkEnchantress's BF (edited 06-03-2000).]

fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2000-06-03 05:28 PM


That was a nice poem.  It is a good one to read with some music in the background.  


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-04 06:38 PM


Hey BF, you did a great job with this one,
It makes me wonder if I'm not getting to dark with my poetry.
I like the swing with your words.
Great job kid.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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