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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2000-06-02 07:57 PM


I found it hard
It was hard to find
I hate myself
And I want to die

© Copyright 2000 Jay Hartson - All Rights Reserved
Jana Tovey
Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
1 posted 2000-06-02 08:14 PM


May I just ask if this is really the way you feel right now, or are you writing about someone else?  

I found it hard
It was hard to find
I hate myself
And I want to die

I take this to mean that you found out something about yourself (or some aspect of your life) and you don't think you can live with it.  With only a little information, it's hard to address what is getting you down, but NOTHING is ever as bad as it seems.  Whatever you hate about yourself right now is the exact thing that you should be focusing on changing - instead of just giving up and wishing yourself dead.  

If I am totally off base, then forgive me.  I'm getting a reputation (I fear) for reading the wrong meaning into things, but I hate to think that you feel like this and no on even listens.

Your friend,  Jana.

[This message has been edited by Jana Tovey (edited 06-02-2000).]

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-06-02 10:17 PM


Well I love the poem itself for the obvious reasons - it says so much in so few words, I can relate to it, very honest and as raw as the subject is, etc. Keep your head up my friend, it doesn't have to be this way. I'm far from being great and all-knowing but I'm here to help you if you want me to. Even if only to listen. Of all the people that I have been lucky enough to meet here I'd have to say that you're one of my favorites so please don't give up on me now. And no I'm not just saying that...I don't like lying at all. Stay in the game Broken 'cause giving up and hating yourself never makes anything better. Love ya & Take care!

                  


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-02 11:23 PM


I sincerely hope you are just describing a mood and not really feeling this way.  We have to have a firm grasp on suicidal workz so I'm gonna be an old meany and close this one...  If you need to talk hon please email me.

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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