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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-05-30 08:07 PM


On your morning drive
as you passed by
and you ran my little hound down
into the ground

Did it ever cross your mind
whose hearts you had just ripped out.

Could you hear my screams
as I ran to the seen
where you had done the damage
with your machine

Could you feel my knees
buckle
when I found
my little hound
ran down

Was satan riding with you
this early morning
you didnt push your horn
and give him a fair warn

and make no mistake
you didnt hit your brakes
on this horrible morn

On your way
to your day
could you feel my dismay
could you hear my heart wail
did you feel the tears
that burned my eyes
as I tried not to cry
throughout my day

You weren't there to hold me up
as my husband watched my heart be crushed

You can't imagine what you have taken away


He was my little man
he made my world alright
he only gave delight
and you tool him away  
without any dismay
Manslaughter I say

You didn't see me weep
when he was buried deep

My heart is screaming
my soul is wailing
and you didnt hear a sound
when you ran him into the ground
my poor little hound.

This is for my little man Corky who I loved
so much.He was hit this morning.
And can no longer be with me.


© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2000-05-30 08:59 PM


Hello,
I am so sorry. Good poem though. But I do know how you feel I lost mine when I was 7 for the same reason although I have a cat now so a may not entirely understand.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

traveling heart
Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26

2 posted 2000-05-31 12:56 PM


I am so sorry for your loss. Losing a dog is such an incredible sadness... I think they are the most childlike of all creatures that are domesticated and I know when my parents cat was killed on a hit and run it was a horrible thing.  My heart is with you today... People are idiots sometimes!  
Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
3 posted 2000-05-31 08:29 PM


I DON'T UNDERSTAND THE KIND OF PERSON THAT WOULD DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shoot,i turn back everytime i see a TURTLE crossing the road!! What is wrong with these people that think they don't have time to watch where they are going!!!!!!! grrrr!!!! This poem made me ANGRY!!!!!

 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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