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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-05-28 07:56 PM


Take it now!
Please take away this pain!
I can't stand it one moment longer,
In it's absence there is peace to gain.

I cannot stand this nothingness,
This emptiness inside,
So many absences in my life,
My soul has no choice but to hide.

Lonliness, an old colleague,
I'm ashamed to say I know him well,
Isis plays the matyr,
She's damned good at it, can't you tell?

Boredom, such a heavy burden to bear,
Try as I might this evil smothers me,
It tells me no one cares,
No one REALLY cares, can't you see?

Anger, lonliness, boredom,
Repitition, restlessness, fear,
Is this all that is meant for me,
I cry a silent tear.

Please help me,
Lift this unending burden,
So my desert like soul can once again,
Live in it's rainforest haven.....


 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Cat
Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 12

1 posted 2000-05-28 08:39 PM


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[This message has been edited by Cat (edited 05-28-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-28 08:43 PM


Cat, that is hard to guage.  Monday mornings are always tough, if I've had a hard weekend.
I need to get out on my own and cannot, which helps get you down.  But writing a few venting poems usually helps  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-05-28 09:16 PM


Isis,
     just remember my friend... someone cares. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-05-29 03:28 AM


It's like something around your neck that you can't get off.

Very heartfelt kid.
love ya.
and on a side note?? What happend to Cat??

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
5 posted 2000-05-29 10:23 PM


i think this is really well done!! And i really can't say much more than that...but that i think it's really great =]

swapius maximus the first


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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