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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
Fears They lurk upoun your dreams at night... They haunt your visions with pure fright... They wait for you to fall asleep... They wait for you to fall in deep... These things could never have true mates... These are the things only the devil creates... So I warn you now, my sweet young dear... Your worst enemy just could be your own death fear... -Princess |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
hello, This is a really good poem just wanted you to know that I really liked it and that you are so talented. always Mario22 |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
~Mario~ Aw! Thank you for your time and sharing of thoughts about my poem..  -Princess |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
OMG what would we do with out our fears. this is so true. Lindsay you have a great to the point poem here, I'm looking forward to more. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Fears???.....ick,..they control me at times. *Great post. *Peace. |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
~Joel the wolf & Spitfire~ Thank you for sharing your thoughts toward my poem.I believe this poem shows people their worst enemy--fear--Something that most of them think the devil created, but twas it only created by their unknowning minds--of what the future brings. And yes Joel what would we do without our fears? -Princess |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Fears can indeed be our worst enemy, for some, they cannot live or even leave the house cos of exaggerated fears. A terrible curse we all most live with and overcome!! Wonderful point poem hon, keep it up. Your topics are quite refreshing here in dark  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
~Isis~ Truly fears can be our worst enemy--of course that is, if we let them. It takes a strong being to over come their fears. I believe if one over comes their fears', the journey ahead becomes much shorter. Thank you, for sharing your thoughts--I'm glad you enjoyed my poem -Princess |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Fear waits until you fall in deep and imerse yourself in it's icy grasp. Fear exists where reason ends and you've captured it rather well in your poem. [This message has been edited by Jana Tovey (edited 05-30-2000).] |
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