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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
These People So many questions to be anwsered... So many lies to be told... But, how can these gentle people be so bold... Truly their hearts are made of gold... When they stare deeply into my sad eyes... And tell me this lovely world never dies... How can these gentle people be so bold... Truly their hearts are made of gold... So many tales to be told... So many truths to be showed... But, how can this life go on... And these people be held in bond... When you look up at the stars... And think those weeping thoughts... Havent you ever believed... That all people are made to grieve... So many questions to be anwsered... So many lies to be told... But, how can these gentle people be so bold... Truly their hearts are made of gold... -Princess |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
Hello, I really thought this poem was good, I am a new learner so far but have written many of my own but I dont think any of them could add up to the quality of yours.Thanks again. |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
~Mario~ Again I thank you for your kind thoughts toward my poem.I also give you my best wishes toward your future poems--I'm sure you will be just as good, if not a better poem writter then me! -Princess |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I enjoyed this also, it has a uplift with a down side all at the same very interesting. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeffyf Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 49Muncie, IN |
Beautiful work, Princess. I enjoyed your poem immensely. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. Jeff |
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