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traveling heart Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26 |
I heard that making love on a sunny afternoon is A saddening way to make it Although it shouldn't seem so On this rainy day making love with you I feel so happy and yet I wonder how we will do going from friends to lovers As time goes on we shall know and then I hope we shall live without regret Until we find our feelings true Just know every day That I love you So much more Than the sunny day before And with each rainy day I shall greet it with a smile And the memory of your loving touches On my naked soul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TravelingHeart~ Welcome to Passion's. A lovely entrance you've made. Let's hear it for 'rainy-weather' !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
Rainy Weather is a really nice poem, it is hard to be with someone that your really good friends with and have that doubt that it could mess up the bond you have with that person, keep up the good work my friend. always Mario22 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Traveling Heart, welcome to Passions my friend... hope that you will find a home here. . . This is a wonderful poem. . . it's hard to make that leap isn't it? All you can do is try and hope that it works out. .. Excellent poem my friend... ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family..I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email..  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome indeed Travelling Heart, hope you resist the travel bug and stay in Passions a while!! Liked your first post, it is scary to take the leap but the possible benefits reaped are often worth the risk I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes it is a big step. very well expressed here, kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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