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Devin
Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-05-27 08:47 AM


I can't tell you where I've been
when I don't know myself.
I'm just trying to make it in this world,
without you.
I needed you at first,
but you're slowly fading from
my grasp.
I thought I loved you,
but I guess it was some silly
schoolgirl crush.

I can't tell you who I am,
when I don't know me.
I'm just a lost little girl,
hiding under the mask of
The Goddess of Death.

But I can't help asking,
Do you love me?
Do you care about me?
Will you be there?

Some will and some won't.
That is the inevitable truth.



 Do not shed a tear for me. I am happy, so be happy also.

Never lose hope, for even the darkest nights have ends. ~Cloud ^_^



© Copyright 2000 Devin - All Rights Reserved
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2000-05-27 11:32 AM


Devin,
Knowing what I know about before makes me courious as to if I know what your talk about. Plus I glad to you poet in here again. Would you talk to me sometime. The poem was quite good.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Devin
Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-05-28 05:10 PM


Arigatou for your kind words, Neala.
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-29 02:54 AM


Devin, this is true, we must find ourselves before we can, or recieve.

a great poem you have here kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-05-29 11:27 AM


~I can't tell you who I am,
when I don't know me.
I'm just a lost little girl,
hiding under the mask of
The Goddess of Death.

*Find yourself my friend...this is a great piece.  It took courage to write and post..so thank you for sharing it. *Peace.

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