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And he draws forth |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
And forever draws... tomorrow cries and he is lost.. The baron of the Dark.. Lost is he.. No one to cry.. who is he? Fornever I... again shall he and lesser the pain once I was.. ye to spite the pain where ever is true.. never is be laugh ou loud.. and so I live.. who am I???? Old....and Dead.. Edward A. Beerman "..Hello...is there anyone out there?..." Pink Floyd |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
FN, I love your style and always will but you are not dead far from it, a heart which expresses pain and longing as yours is certainly alive... You touched me with this one hon .. Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~FN,...An emotional drain here. Well done expression....but you my friend are far from dead. You have done a wonderful job portraying your feelings in this piece. Thank you for sharing. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I agree with the ladies, your expression here is full of thought, life, and breath in pen. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
this was a really good piece of work....brings out a lot of feeling, two thumbs up.....much love, one love peace |
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