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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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A dark shadow settles upon my soul I look down ar you, in my arms Grasping your last breath of life we speak For I have bestowed my evils on you And now you are at your death As the tides of time ebb and flow But time is still for us The tears come as I watch you leave me Like the setting of the sun you go Lingering until all the light has left The candle that was once lit lies dormant Gone with the passing of the night And I have cast this upon your soul, I know But now I must live without hope Without you Without love -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Neala, this is so sad hon. I hate death... Sadly but feelingly portrayed, good work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ditto Isis, A brilliant portrayal of sadness from you Neala. ... Like the setting of the sun you go Lingering until all the light has left ... Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thank you I am glad you liked my poem. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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