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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Dear Blood lust, I've come to a revelation. The fact that it’s taken this long, causes some irratation. You posed as my friend,almost my lover You were able to maipulate me like no other. This supreme verdict which I’ve reached Is a conclusion that cannot be breached….. Blood lust,I don’t want to see you again I wish never to feel your presence in my abode as kin, But as foe ,aye, I’ll be rid of you yet I’ll cease to feel your uncontrolable control,I’ll forget we’d ever met. Never again a passion to see my blood flow, Never again allowed to feel that low. Farewell,my nemsis Blood lust I’ll scrape you off my armor like rust. Goodbye,may we never meet again. And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You have interesting thoughts to say the least... Well Written  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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mcmic New Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 3 |
Very very very GOOD! I like your style very much! The title is what caught my atention. Keep posting. I would love to read more! |
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mcmic New Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 3 |
Very very very GOOD! I like your style very much! The title is what caught my atention. Keep posting. I would love to read more! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Phew! I'm glad I'm not this guy! 'Sounds like you're well rid of him. I liked this line a lot: 'But as foe ,aye, I’ll be rid of you yet' 'Could have been Rabbie Burns or Braveheart (William Wallace) speaking! As a Scotsman myself that tickled me... (Have you got some Scottish blood in you perchance?)Powerfull stuff Swåmpy! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Lol!! Allan,as a matter of fact yes...my great great grandfather on my mum's side came from Ireland,in fact we're s'posed to have a castle on the emerald isle (doesn't everybody??¿). And my mum's father's great great something was supposedly from scotland =P My descent seems to come out once in awhile in my language and taste (i love green :P) Lol but i think it's just a coincedence......but then you never know.....heehee Thanks everyone for the comments!! swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lover is a leech? an interesting poem, really enjoyed it. Never again a passion to see my blood flow, Never again allowed to feel that low. Farewell,my nemsis Blood lust I’ll scrape you off my armor like rust. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh) "Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir The applause nails down my silence La tristesse durera Scream to a sigh, to a sigh I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory People send postcards And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery La tristesse durera Scream to a sigh, to a sigh I sold my medal It paid a bill It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks The sadness will never go Will never go away Baby it's here to stay |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Swampie, Please forgive me if I have this all wrong, but when I read this poem (and I loved it by the way!!), I got this picture of someone saying goodbye to their period! I never saw a guy in it at all. Is that single minded, or what? Hope I haven't offended. I just had to share my demented imaginings with someone. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
LOL!!!!! no no no HAHAA!!!!!! LOL...no Jana,i'm not old enuf to say goodbye to that......unfortunately...LOL...haha this is a very.....er.....interesting interpertation though..HAHA!! I'm rather masochistic.....cuts,burns...and this poem is kind of a feeble attempt to say goodbye to that,to leave it behind. I'm not going to allow myself to do that anymore. hence the line "Never again a passion to see my blood flow, Never again allowed to feel that low." =P i wonder if anyone else thought i was talking about menopause??¿ LOL!! haha And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
I'm glad you weren't offended (I guess I've revealed the stage of life that I'm at right now!!). Thanks for answering and for being such a good sport. I was soooo hesitant about asking, but my curiosity always gets the better of me! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
LOL...no sweat...i thought it was really amusing...LOL And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
And here I thought it was a lust of wanting to run down the street with a blade. hahaha I guess we all have our own blood lust. Thanks kid an interesting read. hahaha I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Fantastic! That gets two thumbs up Great job.By Necro Draconis Let nature guide your soul. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Thank you Necro!! =] i appreciate your words of commendation =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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