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Bloodlust

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SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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since 03-29-2000
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0 posted 05-26-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

Dear Blood lust,
     I've come to a revelation.
The fact that itís taken this long, causes some irratation.
You posed as my friend,almost my lover
You were able to maipulate me like no other.
This supreme verdict which Iíve reached
Is a conclusion that cannot be breachedÖ..
Blood lust,I donít want to see you again
I wish never to feel your presence in my abode as kin,
But as foe ,aye, Iíll be rid of you yet
Iíll cease to feel your uncontrolable control,Iíll forget weíd ever met.
Never again a passion to see my blood flow,
Never again allowed to feel that low.
Farewell,my nemsis Blood lust
Iíll scrape you off my armor like rust.
Goodbye,may we never meet again.



 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
© Copyright 2000 Tivonya S. - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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1 posted 05-27-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You have interesting thoughts to say the least... Well Written  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


mcmic
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2 posted 05-27-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for mcmic   Email mcmic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for mcmic

Very very very GOOD! I like your style very much! The title is what caught my atention. Keep posting. I would love to read more!
mcmic
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3 posted 05-27-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for mcmic   Email mcmic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for mcmic

Very very very GOOD! I like your style very much! The title is what caught my atention. Keep posting. I would love to read more!
allan
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since 04-09-2000
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4 posted 05-27-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for allan   Email allan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit allan's Home Page   View IP for allan

Phew! I'm glad I'm not this guy! 'Sounds like you're well rid of him.

I liked this line a lot:

'But as foe ,aye, Iíll be rid of you yet'

'Could have been Rabbie Burns or Braveheart (William Wallace) speaking! As a Scotsman myself that tickled me...   (Have you got some Scottish blood in you perchance?)

Powerfull stuff SwŚmpy!  


SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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5 posted 05-31-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

Lol!! Allan,as a matter of fact yes...my great great grandfather on my mum's side came from Ireland,in fact we're s'posed to have a castle on the emerald isle (doesn't everybody??Ņ). And my mum's father's great great something was supposedly from scotland =P My descent seems to come out once in awhile in my language and taste (i love green :P) Lol but i think it's just a coincedence......but then you never know.....heehee

Thanks everyone for the comments!!

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 4532
ireland


6 posted 06-01-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Lover is a leech? an interesting poem, really enjoyed it.

Never again a passion to see my blood flow,
Never again allowed to feel that low.
Farewell,my nemsis Blood lust
Iíll scrape you off my armor like rust.




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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers

La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh)
"Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much
I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir
The applause nails down my silence
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory
People send postcards
And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I sold my medal
It paid a bill
It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks
The sadness will never go Will never go away
Baby it's here to stay

Jana Tovey
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7 posted 06-01-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

Swampie,

Please forgive me if I have this all wrong, but when I read this poem (and I loved it by the way!!), I got this picture of someone saying goodbye to their period!  I never saw a guy in it at all.  Is that single minded, or what?  Hope I haven't offended.  I just had to share my demented imaginings with someone.
SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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8 posted 06-01-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

LOL!!!!! no no no HAHAA!!!!!! LOL...no Jana,i'm not old enuf to say goodbye to that......unfortunately...LOL...haha this is a very.....er.....interesting interpertation though..HAHA!!
I'm rather masochistic.....cuts,burns...and this poem is kind of a feeble attempt to say goodbye to that,to leave it behind. I'm not going to allow myself to do that anymore. hence the line "Never again a passion to see my blood flow,
Never again allowed to feel that low."

=P i wonder if anyone else thought i was talking about menopause??Ņ LOL!! haha


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
Jana Tovey
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9 posted 06-02-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

I'm glad you weren't offended (I guess I've revealed the stage of life that I'm at right now!!).  Thanks for answering and for being such a good sport.  I was soooo hesitant about asking, but my curiosity always gets the better of me!
SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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Posts 357
Illinois


10 posted 06-02-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

LOL...no sweat...i thought it was really amusing...LOL




 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
Angels Camp


11 posted 06-03-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

And here I thought it was a lust of wanting to run down the street with a blade. hahaha
I guess we all have our own blood lust.

Thanks kid an interesting read. hahaha

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Necro Draconis
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since 05-19-2000
Posts 115


12 posted 06-04-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Necro Draconis   Email Necro Draconis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Necro Draconis

Fantastic! That gets two thumbs up Great job.

 By Necro Draconis

Let nature guide your soul.
SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 357
Illinois


13 posted 06-13-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

Thank you Necro!! =] i appreciate your words of commendation =]

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
 
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