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Hole In My Heart
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Hole In My Heart |
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Trynete Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35Cape Cod, MA |
There's a hole in my heart, where you use to belong. Now I just feel like I'm lost in the fog. What can I say or do? I'm completely lost without you. All I can say is I'm sorry, and beg for you to forgive me. I've forgiven you, now everyday, all I do is hope and pray, you'll forgive me too. I can't eat or sleep, all I can do is weep. I've cried and cried, cried so much I cried my eyes dry. Ever since we fought, my stomach has been in knots. The words you said keep playing over and over in my mind, like a broken record, and the off button I can't seem to find. Those words cut through my heart like a knife. I hope we get through this, because I so badly still want to be your wife. Eventhough I played it off, in my heart I always knew it from the start, You were where I wanted to spend the rest of my life. Please don't give up on us, at least not without a fight. To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...what an emotional outpour here. Well done expression. Heartfelt and longing...take care of yourself. *Peace. *Thanks for sharing this. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well done! I know these feelings, I've been there, sometimes you do everything you can do and it's still not enough! Don't give up the fight! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Patience, strength, love, hope. all of these. to you kid. you express yourself very well. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Please don't give up on us at least not without a fight." I have pondered which decision is best for both involved in situations such as this. To stay and fight for the relationship and perhaps learn in the process...or if one wants to leave let them go and get on with your life. The reason why I fought the first time was because I totally thought it was the right thing to do...and I didn't want to let go..I thought I could win her back....I couldn't. The reason why I let go the second time and I thought my thinking was totally right..was because I realized if I win her back..she doesn't really want me anyway..I would be her second or third choice..she would then make my life miserable because she would be stuck with someone she didn't really want to be with. Just some thoughts on life..James |
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