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Isis
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0 posted 2000-05-21 09:30 PM


Give it back!!
Give back all that you have taken from me,
Which is just about everything,
Give it back and only then will your spirit be free.

Remember, I alone know who you are,
I am witness to your soulless reign,
Focus on life instead of a living death,
Or you will slowly go insane.

I want it back!!
My soul enlightened, no more pain,
My sweet spirit is now fragile and worn,
In killing it what is there to gain?

I need it back!
My love of life, my natural tendency to laugh,
Perhaps you like this way?
Do you have all victories graphed?

I'm not asking or begging,
I am TELLING you,
Those days are over,
Now there is nothing you can do.

I really should thank you,
With your help, my spirit is now set free,
I know what I am capable of,
My spirit is indeed free.

No more mortal blows,
No more unending pain,
Um Mani Padme Hum,
The jewel has risen again..



 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-21 10:41 PM


Isis~
A very interesting piece.
No one can take your ~Spirit~
It is yours ... you can choose to
shackle it or set it free .....
glad yours is flying free.

I like the title and it's relvance
to the poem ...
'The jewel has risen again'
Hoorah !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Isis
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2 posted 2000-05-21 10:59 PM


Thanks Marge!  Some of those eastern philosophies and beliefs are truly wonderful  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-21 11:59 PM


Yes very interesting indeed?
I also like the title.
and the ending. not sure what to say about the rest?? you got me there?
you know my E. ??
You should want me to catch this ?? and shake it up??
love ya. kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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4 posted 2000-05-22 12:05 PM


What do you mean exactly Joel????????????

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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5 posted 2000-05-22 12:22 PM


Isis,
      and what a jewel you truly are!!

This poem, as well as all of yours lately, have that "Only I am in control of my life!" theme. . . I like it!!!

"The jewel has risen again" only this time, much more polished...  

Excellent.. .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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6 posted 2000-05-22 06:19 PM


Thanks Sven *hugs*

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SpitFire
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7 posted 2000-05-23 09:10 PM


~Isis,...such strength,..I love it.  
~"Do you have all victories graphed?"...gosh I can't count how many times I've wondered this.  Oh and I love the "I'm not asking or begging, I am TELLING you" part...right on!!! Soar Isis,...soar higher than you ever have before. *Peace.

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