The Doors - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #1

The Doors

silygrl498
New Member

since 2000-05-19

Posts 2

0 posted 2000-05-20 09:42 AM

Secluded by the doors
of the brittle ramparts,
unable to evade,
unable to find a way out.

Confused and worried,
depressed and lost.
Hurt and lonely,
insecure and desolated.

The doors are jammed shut
like a forbidden exit,
searching desperately for something to unlock the doors,
but nothing is found.

How long will the doors be binded together?
How long until they are pried open?
No one knows,
and only time shall tell.

Unless some sort of wedge is found,
and the doors are forced to
release the lock that is keeping
in all the redundant words that are kept hidden far away.

Time has now drifted by,
and the doors are no longer jammed shut.
They swing open, but close if they need.
All the words that were kept hidden away have now been freed.

For something was found,
something so unique, that it can not be described.
Something has opened it's heart, and helped
me to open my mind.

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-05-20 09:46 AM

Dear poet,
Good poem on desolation.Hope to see more.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-05-20 06:59 PM

I like the aspect of the something opening this door.
I wish for the same.
a great concept,
and a great poem.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.