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Cyndol Claycamp
Junior Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-05-18 02:05 PM

Falling
Tumbling down
I fall deep in the depths farther then can see.
I fall with deep depression.
While I am falling my depression builds.
Slowly it consumes my life.
But for I am falling deep within it.
But I am strong I will hold.
I will cry in my pain but silently never to show it.
I am falling
Falling down
The hole of depression.
Being consumed with no where to turn
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Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-19 03:21 AM

I have been in this depression you talk about, and it's no fun.
but your poem is a great expression on this ??falling.
nice work.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 2000-05-19 03:27 PM

I like the use of the letters to resemble "falling" very very cool =) I have and am experiencing depression but I am better because Im on medication...good job...and keep it up...remember: if you ever need to talk we're always here

ashley

"Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

3 posted 2000-05-22 09:07 PM

Yes I have this depression and fight a lossing battle all the time but the battle
must continue
great poem

Night Chica
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 39
Vermont

4 posted 2000-05-23 04:16 PM

Your poem describes exactly what it's like. I've been there before as well. Keep fighting, because the moment you let it consume you completely is the moment you will be completely at its mercy. Hang in there hon.

~* Megs *~

I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.

-- Margaret Mitchell

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