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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
"Goddess" Does pain ever end, Memories cease to be? Shall I ever be happy inside me? Do you understand What it is I'm trying to say? Goddess knows, I wasn't made this way. Events occurred lifetimes ago, It hardened my heart, my soul also. If I close my eyes Will you fade away? Memories-Nightmares You're all the same! Just go away! Leave me in peace! Let me find solace, Just once in sleep! Blessed be my dreams, I pray, Goddess make them go away! Let the sun shine As Luna sweeps the shadows clean. [This message has been edited by Cyndey (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Such beautiful words...to find inner peace is the goal of us all. I feel this poem is fluid and moving...very touching. I tip my hat to you, and hope you find that which you seek! ^_^ LadySofia "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." Amanda Piatt |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Merry meet! I like this much--just posted one with a similar mood in Open #7--must be this moon...lovely poem, lovely entrance to Passions--welcome and blessed be. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Cyndey, Well now...this is the best of the best here! As you know, I love your work..but this one if one of my faves!! Restless...emotional...pleading...fluid...just great work girl! love, -Holly |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions, I felt your pain in this one hon, and THIS goddess blesses you and prays you find an end to all your pain shortly. Wonderful work *NAMASTE* I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Welcome to dark passions my friend. Memories-Nightmares You're all the same! I feel this part of your poem it hurts. this is a great start here. you seem to have a knack for it. Keep writing kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Joel-Yes, you are so correct,that is the climax of the poem. In my mind, the voice of the poem really begins to echo with the pain of all the past hurts, and endless emotions.LadyS, Isis, and Serenity-I wrote this a few years ago, and yes, finally I found the solace I sought for what seemed lifetimes. I have found peace with my past.  There is warmth in the Sun...Cyndey |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
WElcome to passions, I love this one as well.....and I agree with Joel on these lines "Memories-Nightmares You're all the same!" Glad to hear you've found your solace, welcome again! Daniel |
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