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Isis
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0 posted 2000-05-18 12:46 PM


He speaks to me when I sleep,
Only in my dreams,
He comforts me as no other,
He puts balm on tender seams.

He alone makes everything alright,
He chases away the pain,
He breathes life into this feeble heart,
So I can face the world again.

He takes me to magical places,
Far off realities,
When we love it is far more than spiritual,
It was emotional sensuality.

Some mornings how I hate to wake,
Wish I really could spend my life with him,
With him alone there is no pain,
With him life wouldn't be so grim...........




 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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LadySofia
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1 posted 2000-05-18 02:46 AM


Dear Isis,

Such sad yet truthful words...I reach out my hand in sympathetic understanding. This poem was truly heartfelt; I can say I have had similar experiences (and still do at times). Very touching, it melted me to the core. Thank you for your wonderful comments to my poetry.

^_^ LadySofia

sKiTtLeS
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2 posted 2000-05-18 01:36 PM


What a wonderful poem, Isis.  I think we all have a special someone in our dreams, a perfect someone just for us.  And if we're lucky, we'll find that person....

 sKiTtLeS~

Isis
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3 posted 2000-05-18 06:34 PM


Thanks to Lady Sofia and Skittles  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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4 posted 2000-05-19 12:16 PM


Yes, we do all have someone in our dreams like this. . . if only they'd come true sometimes. . .

Well, at least we can still dream my friend. ..

Excellent poem. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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5 posted 2000-05-19 12:44 PM


Never fear Sven, I've always been good at dreaming!! LOL

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
6 posted 2000-05-20 03:27 AM


I just knew my astral projections went a long way. haha
love it kid.

Joel. Still at dad's working on his pc, going home on Sat. morn.
Love ya. kid.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2000-05-21 10:52 PM


this is a keeper. I have a "dream man" too., that's why I sleep with two pillows, one to hold onto!!
that sounded kind of sad didn't it???

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com


Isis
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8 posted 2000-05-21 11:02 PM


Well Joel I shall catch up with you when you return!!  Hope your trip washed away those cobwebs!!    And perhaps those projections do reach out!!!  
Kathleen, I don't think it sounds sad to say you hug a pillow, I like to cuddle something when I sleep too!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-05-21 11:15 PM


Isis~
A lovely poem ...
the stuff dreams are made of.
Great big *sighs* with this delight.
Hey .... and the minute they start to
talk back ... POOF !
You can just wake up !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Isis
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Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-05-21 11:59 PM


Thanks Marge  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



starboards
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since 1999-10-14
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longwood, florida
11 posted 2000-05-22 09:18 AM


Hey isis--
   does this "dream man" have a friend?? heehehehe...great poem and ur so lucky to be able to see such men in ur dreams...i loved this one...keep it up k big sis?

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

Isis
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Sunny Queensland
12 posted 2000-05-22 06:23 PM


Thanks Ash *hugs* my sister  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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