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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 2000-05-17 10:59 PM


You said you'd call
but my phone NEVER rings
You said that your in love
but the birds NEVER sing
You said that you care
but this I NEVER see
You say Im pretty
then why cant i be me?


 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

© Copyright 2000 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-05-18 01:22 PM


Good poem starboards.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-18 06:52 PM


Why indeed hon??  Obviously the man is stupid!!  He doesn't know what he is missing out on!!  More fool him hon   *hugs*

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2000-05-18 07:55 PM


Oh Man!
I can sure relate to this!
"Poke him in the eye 'till he SEES! (sorry)had to let it out!
But seriously, I know just how you feel! I'm sorry that you
or anyone has to feel like this!  
Well expressed Starboards

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 2000-05-18 10:49 PM


Thanks guys...i really appreciate it when i know someone else can relate to what im going through now...thanks again guys....i love you all!!!

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

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