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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 2000-05-17 10:52 PM


Hi Isis....remember me?? long time no see...

With my thoughts
swirling through my head
I glance at you
as i roll out of bed

The time is growing near
pretty soon i must leave
but dont you worry
and dont you grieve

I've tried to overcome
all the feelings I've felt inside
but my actions are useless
such feelings I can not hide

So it is better in the long run
If i leave before it gets worse
because I only bring sorrow
and this inevitable curse

Please dont run after me
nor follow me down
I can not bear to see you
finally this conclusion is found

Don't bother to contact me
or keep in touch
its only gonna make matters worse
because I love you so much.


 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

© Copyright 2000 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-05-18 12:04 PM


Starboards.......(((((HUGS))))) welcome home little sister of mine.  I've missed you!!  Really have.
This is wonderful work hon.  This poem presents you as much more powerful these days.  Hope you are!  And again welcome home  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 2000-05-18 04:18 PM


Isis--
  thanks...i really appreciate the fact that u respond to my poems...i know i will always have someone to talk to here ((((HUGS))))

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-05-18 06:50 PM


ALWAYS - my poetic little cyber sister always!!  ***HUGS***              

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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