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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-17 09:46 PM


  I am loveless,
no one loves me,
  I love you
why can't you love me?
  I love you
love me??

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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-05-17 09:55 PM


I think we all have felt this way
from time to time
I know I have.
what a great way of saying it

starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 2000-05-17 11:06 PM


lonely...
  I LOVE YOU!! i can relate too this poem...the hardest thing in life is knowing that you love someone and that you can never be with them...good job at portraying such frustrations....

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

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