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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

0 posted 2000-05-17 08:14 PM


What I Put You Through...

Sometimes,
I don't know,
What to do,
Or who to turn to,

Sometime,
I dont'know,
Where to go,
Or how to get there,

And it's Because,
Of these things,
That i've put you through so much,
Unintentional pain...
and hurt...

And i wanted to say...

I'm sorry,
For what i put you through,
All the pain and hurt,
That i didn't mean to,
But what's done is done,
And what's past is past,
Let's just try real hard to make this friendship last...

by
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


© Copyright 2000 Bronx - All Rights Reserved
~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

1 posted 2000-05-17 08:28 PM


That was sweet...probably not meant for me...but sweet. I'm sorry, if I have caused you pain. I know I'm...annoying, aren't I?

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-05-17 09:58 PM


Hi Bronx Im new at this
But I completely relate to your poem
Ive caused much pain too in the past
great job of saying it

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 2000-05-17 11:04 PM


WOW bronx!! great job!! this poem made me happy to know that people can actually feel and be sorry for things that they have done unintentionally...please keep posting...i enjoy ur work

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

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