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Isis
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0 posted 2000-05-17 02:26 AM


The wolf growled at me, a terrifying sound,
My hand caressed the hilt of my sword,
Our eyes locked together, in a battle of wills already,
The wolf's eyes showing anger, lust and dischord.

'Not tonight my savage friend, we need not battle this eve!'
'For I am the Warrior Princess, and I lone wolf will succeed!' said I,
The wolf he lunged at me, knocked me to the ground,
I was not quick enough, couldn't fight him off, saw fur, couldn't even glimpse the sky!

But he didn't fight me, didn't hurt in any way,
All he did was breathe in my scent,
Then before my very eyes, he changed!
The wolf turned into a man, whose looks were heaven sent!!

So handsome, tall and strong,
He took my breathe away,
He looked at me apprasingly,
And said 'Oh Isis please heed what I say!'

'I am Solan, half man, half wolf,'
'I too fight all evil, and I'm glad my journey brough me to you!'
Ever so slowly he stepped forward,
And placed his arms around me, his warmth, his emotions, melted me right through!

And if the aftermath of love,
Love made by celebrating peace and light,
Solan asked to join us,
In our neverending fight.

I don't feel easily,
But this man with an animals soul,
Totally undid me,
I lost all sense of control.

So Solan would be taken back,
To meet Ares and Angelus,
But in the meantime the night was ours,
A night for love, anger and souls, a night for us...



 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-17 02:44 AM


I like the ending kid. hahaha
This is great.
Joel.


 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-17 06:27 PM


So you REALLY liked it Joel, come on honestly????  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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3 posted 2000-05-19 12:24 PM


Isis, what's not to like about this poem?

I loved the imagery too. . . just wonderful. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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