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Burning Ice |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Warmth given off by everyone Within their hearts burns a radiating flame The flame of their emotion and very essence Lighting up their soul Allured to by the unknown Intrigued as to why Hoping to learn and understand Unknowingly setting myself up for the fall Abhorred by your burning coldness Feeling the slow burn slowly consume me Slowly moving throughout my soul... Crying out from the Soul attack Is that all You’ve known? The burn of the Eternal Ice Now you are freezing my Essence To match that of your own. Your cold flame offers little Weak you are, Giving into the Coldness Letting it Ravage your very being without a struggle Slowly I see the cold flame get colder I thought everyone had warmth within, That was until I learned the Truth Warm has been banished from You Empty inside...Never will you know the Joys of Life Slowly the Isolating barrier solidifies around you Shunning out everything, leaving you to yourself Drifting out into the cold side joining the lonesome glaciers Forever being alone, Ice burning the soul and the flame growing colder The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
What a description of a soul ?? being ?? or sent, or going farther out to the cold, or what is within burning colder. What a description, great!! Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Great Poem, what a description too! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow..thanks Joel...this was inspired by a few things..a poem from HS and someone I know just like this. Thank You lonely.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love imagery and feeling, nothing better than a piece about warmth or coldness... Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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