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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-05-16 09:54 PM


Panic

Im feeling all awhirl
my mind is going nuts
Im nervous and Im shaky
for no reason I can find

If relief would only find me
and stay forever by my side

If my body wouldnt feel
as if its screaming inside
If I didnt have these rushes
of agony inside  
that make me want to run and scream
and find a place to hide

Its all I can do
to hold the surges back
To remain sane
and not have an attack.

© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-17 01:25 AM


Bluebrdy65, God how I know this poem,

"If my body wouldn’t feel
as if its screaming inside
If I didn’t have these rushes
of agony inside  
that make me want to run and scream
and find a place to hide"

I'm a little bit different, I just want to run amuck, I'm to damn big to hide. haha
but yes I have these attacks also.
a good description of it here.

Joel.



 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-05-17 01:27 AM


Wow, You've touched base on something I haven't been able to describe into words...wonderful Poem....
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