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Scarlet Lady
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-16 05:42 PM




Took a journey one lifetime
Way into the future
Looking for something
What,  I do not know now
Took my compass along
Lost it along the way somehow
When I glanced your way!

I started to panic
I knew I was lost in you
Then the darkness began to set in
Stumbling as I traveled through
I knew I would be had by you
I tried to turn back many days
Feet that would not budge
My heart was leading the way

A rocky  ride at the least
Wild emotions
Passions running wild and free
That is what you did to me!
It would take my breath away
Keep me suspended in time
Help me to forget
Make me regret!

Younger than I have ever  felt
So kept,  in the new of the hour
Felt so needed once again
And the excitement,  a DRUG!
Helped me to see how short life is
When your suspended in time
And time is but an Illusion!




[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 05-16-2000).]

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-05-16 07:38 PM


Great work!!  Time can be an illusion to all, and who says we are reading it correctly anyways!!  
Great work hon..

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-17 01:05 AM


Our heart does take us for a wild ride sometimes, beyond reason, beyond all possible understanding.
We are at the mercy of this thing call love.
you have a great way of putting in down kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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