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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-05-16 01:07 PM


"Lord Harry's Tea Party"

Subliminal art
like a black hole covered by white paint
Indecencies emerge from the light
guilting even the devil to dance

Hardships find new meanings
in an aura of great despair.
A laughter sprays the
tunnel of a deaf man's ear.

Transparent skin
covers the prolific sins
and honors it with a kiss
then a quick goodbye.

Sincerity becomes a luxury
you drown in over time.
And all the tainted deeds
come back to haunt you
unveiled as the pale horse.

And only then will
the answers surface
and the bitterness of "reasons"
disappear in the rage
of the devils dance.


~~~Carman~~~

© Copyright 2000 Carman - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-17 12:53 PM


Carmin, I have danced with this devil a few times, maybe to a different toon, but the same beat,... of the heart.
you have a very powerful poem here.
keep it for all time.
My deeds have all been unveiled and have ridden this pale horse.
Thank you my friend.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-05-18 05:05 PM


Thank you Joel...

I appreciate your reply and your understanding.

Thanks,

Carman

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