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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois

0 posted 2000-05-16 12:00 PM


I look for the first blank page & find it.
I wind it
Around my brain & toss it in the trash.
The crash
is defening when it hits the very end.
The MERRY end
& i'm dead now,i'm dead & gone today.
It won't be long away
before i catch my death of cold.....heart.
It's a sold part
bought & sold by none other than my stelth.
So i damned myself
to a dead end.............

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~This is what comes of listening to led zepplin all day......yes that's right....i get even stranger. And you know what??¿ This doesn't make any sense now that i'm in my normal state of mind.....it's a daydream..... more or less just a fun scribble so don't anybody get worried =] i know how you nice people are...LOL...actually i'm very glad this doesn't make any sense anymore....because i wouldn't want to really feel that way. Better to see this poe as a good joke rather than real. Is that twisted or what??¿



 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-16 08:09 PM


Maybe so kid, but it still comes from the inner self. Even when I have fun, it ?? comes from somewhere.
I know that when I'm feeling good I could still run amuck. hahaha
have fun with this. it is good.
But you know my E? right?
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-16 08:28 PM


Hon I don't like to hear you like this?  You ok, email if you need or want to talk?  Great writing though!!  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
3 posted 2000-05-17 07:32 PM


Okay,you're right....but i'm trying....sort of. heehee. Thank you both for your kindness =]

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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