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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2000-05-15 02:36 PM


Through a mind that talks
within a soul that walks
the silent creature that slowly stalks;
The night wind screams
no day lit dreams
ripping through realities seams;
A silent voice speaks
that shatters mountain peaks
And resonates for weeks and weeks;
Here I am a man
a vengance long has just began
now feel the wrath of this master plan;
Just where from here oh mortal men
what curses lined ye for your sin
and know your death lies just within;
For reality shall soon consume
sparing nothing born of womb
killing more than you so assume;
The life of waste shall now do the same
rape and pillage-kill and mame
and set this wretched world aflame
So run in fear and screaming fits
the sun and moon my powers eclipse
an ending above that of apocalypse.


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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-15 07:45 PM


~Hey there,...you're just my taste.  Heehee,...very interesting piece here.  "So run in fear and screaming fits",....hell I've done this and think it's damn good advice for the crazy things that take place in today's world. .
tawny
Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14

2 posted 2000-05-15 07:48 PM


I like it... reminds me of one of those ancient playwrights... when a curse is being cast upon someone, words straight out of a spellbook or something

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