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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Cut Me A single exchange slicing like a razor through my very being Turning my existence upside down Yet meaning nothing simple play that kicks a weakened soul © 5/14/00 Gary Pence |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Meaning nothing to some, but everything to you. So many pains in this world are often shared alone. *hugs* Great work  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jonas: I can never get over how cruel people can be. I've read your incredible poetry and your kind and encouraging replies to mine, so I know the beautiful spirit of you. There is no way you deserved that. Ask God to build your defenses against that kind of sharp arrows to deflect them. You deserve the BEST! Ellie 02 |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My heart to you my friend, this poem is so simple and pure, to the very heart of you, it doesn't scream but quietly proclaims a ?? lost and trodden upon spirit. I have been there, and know it well. Take care. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Jonas The pain you felt at that exchange is so evident in this spectacular work. Quiet, but powerful. We're here for you. A great work, thanks. Sylvia |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you so much for your warm comments everyone I was really hypersensitive yesterday and I read something that bothered me. But I realize now that I took it wrong because of how I was feeling at the time. Thank you for the support and I am glad to have found such a warm group of people to share my writing and my feelings with! |
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