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For_Never
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0 posted 05-14-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

Darkness draws,
yet I beget..
hate..
they come to kill me yet...

I won't die...


No, no, I won't Die...

Life is long..so is told..

long grows the bold..
even moreso when passion runs cold...
take that drink...

sing that song..
cry a bit..

the useful die young...

I am old...


Edward A Beerman
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JOY 14
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1 posted 05-14-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Good ending
"The useful die young...
I am old."
I like it!

Joy
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2 posted 05-14-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I like the endings too interesting musings as always Edward, hey get in touch sometime my friend  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Joel the wolf
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3 posted 05-15-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

It seems the older I get the useless I get.
the older I get, christ!
Thanks.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
SpitFire
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4 posted 05-15-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Very interesting post here,....thanks for the wonderful read.
For_Never
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5 posted 09-11-2006 08:44 AM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for For_Never

Thanks for the comments everyone.  Sorry for the delay in responding.  I have fo ra long while, locked inside a prison of accepted and believed in bars.  Doubt, fear, and acceptance in turn forged each chain, each rod, and finally, languid solitude of my soul.  I found the tool to excape with mine own scarred soul.   The pain that once tore me asunder came to cut my bonds.  Anguish is a sorry savior, but save me it did.  Thus I owe a debt of honor to my new captive.  I feel for a new loss, yet regain a past triumph.

thank you my suffering,

till then,
Edd
 
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