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isiskate81
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-05-13 01:06 PM


I want to be loved.
I want to have hope,
I want to be special,
I want to know I'm the only one in your life,
I want to scream at the top of my lungs to be heard,
I want to be treated like I'm a person not just a female,
I want to drive my car as fast as I want,
I want to be able to say I love you without fear of getting hurt,
I want to be happy for the rest of my life,
I want you and only you for the rest of my life.

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-13 01:57 PM


~Oooh,...this seems like it just came right out of you....great expression.  I liked this lots...felt for you while reading.  You got your point right across.  Well done.  
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-14 11:59 PM


Yes it seemed you had your head out the window, screaming this out. haha
great job.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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