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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-05-12 11:06 PM


I have my ghosts, there is no denying,
Past mistakes, people long gone,
Sometimes if I listen hard enough,
They whisper to me, or I hear them crying.

Beloved relatives dead now for so long,
An uncle sometimes visits, plays jokes on us like he did in life,
He is happy I know, and that brings me peace,
No longer has he to live that life of strife.

My Grandmother dear Aseaneth,
She is my guardian angel,
I know she is with me always,
And I'm sure she one of Heaven's most precious angels.

My unborn baby daughter,
Hell she'd be about six now,
I feel her heart cry out to me,
'Mummy it is for the best, I wasn't mean to be!'

Grandpa Horatio so childlike in his last days,
Still wanting to share his lollies with me,
Now he's embraced by Heaven's painless ways,
Hope he too is proud of me.

They all look on watch me live my life,
Sending their love my way,
I hope they are proud of me,
And forgive me the mistakes I've made.

I hope they all know I still think of them,
That I am 'with' them in my heart,
Loving them as always,
As I've done right from the start.

When it's my time to leave this plain,
Sure I'll be scared and sad,
But I'm also looking forward to seeing them all again,
And remenise about the great times we all had.




 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan
1 posted 2000-05-13 01:07 AM


Dear Isis !  
Now this is what I call a gooooooooooooooooood memory. This is no doubt a tribute to the ghosts that make you feel surrouded every time you look around and every time you need them.
This attempt is simply as beautiful as before.
I admire your thoughts and concerns for the people who are not with you in real rather they are somewhere with your shadow, in your room, at your workplace and every where you go. They hold you up very high and give you an everlasting feeling of security and home.

Keep up the excellent work Isis.
We all Love You !              

Zunera  


 

Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan
2 posted 2000-05-13 01:12 AM


Dear Isis !  
Now this is what I call a gooooooooooooooooood memory. This is no doubt a tribute to the ghosts that make you feel surrouded every time you look around and every time you need them.
This attempt is simply as beautiful as before.
I admire your thoughts and concerns for the people who are not with you in real rather they are somewhere with your shadow, in your room, at your workplace and every where you go. They hold you up very high and give you an everlasting feeling of security and home.

Keep up the excellent work Isis.
We all Love You !              

Zunera  

Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
3 posted 2000-05-13 02:03 AM


Isis, great poem.
It really made me think, I lost my father a year ago almost to this day, and it's true I look forward to seeing his smile, and hearing his words of wisdom again.

Thanks for flooding me with warm memories.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.



armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
4 posted 2000-05-13 08:47 AM


"My unborn baby daughter,
Hell she'd be about six now,
I feel her heart cry out to me,
'Mummy it is for the best, I wasn't mean to be!'"

I nearly broke down with tears.  For this right here is my story.  And I blame myself everyday.  I wonder if my baby would say the same?  My baby would be six in August.  I never knew the sex.  But i long for her/him everyday.  This was a beautiful piece Isis.


Carman


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East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-05-13 01:08 PM


Excellent Isis... they are always watching. . .they always know. . . they speak, we only have to listen. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-05-14 07:33 PM


Thanks everyone!!   Carmen I am sure he/she knows you, is with you, and feels the same. *hugs*  I know how you feel.  I believe in heaven there is only love and forgiveness so your baby just loves you.
Zunera I like the way you think!!
  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-05-15 12:15 PM


I'll say this again, "they know we still love them, and love us back."
Thanks kid.
Joel.
PS did you find the hidden room? E me.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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