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Rene_M
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 26
Melrose Park, IL, 60160

0 posted 2000-05-12 01:26 PM


I have always looked forward to something in time
And life was, once my friend
Now, all I look forward to
Is the end

The answer to it all
The one that will get me up
From the emotional fall

Restless, Confused, and Emotionally Disturbed
In Bed I Lay
Waiting for the final day
The Day of Freedom and Eternal Happiness
The End to this Madness

The price I must pay
For that glorious day is

My Dignity
My Honor
MY Soul or maybe....

My Life.



© Copyright 2000 Rene F. Morales Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-05-12 11:08 PM


Rene, such pain in this!!  Honey unless you killed another human being, there is nothing you could have done that you would have to pay for with your own life!!  Know that please, if you need to talk, email anytime.
*hugs*

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Rene_M
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 26
Melrose Park, IL, 60160
2 posted 2000-05-17 03:00 PM


Isis,  Once again U have made me feel better and loved. That, is something that I haven't felt very often as U can see. I guess it's just better to let things out, than to have them inside of U haunting U and may making U do things that U never thought U would do. Thanx for your trust, and offer to be there for me, I appreciate it a lot. With a BIG warm HUG, I thank U for your comments and support.

   On another note, I will be posting the poem that I was telling U about very soon and I want U to help me finish it, cuz I'm still undecided about the ending.

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