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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Get a Clue!!! Oh I don't think you ever knew ever felt the tip of my finger where the burn still exists always will a memory,...a signature the result of your lack your abusive theme reckless society not as it seems~ purple swirls of anger decorate dedicate~ black tears stop flowing for you,......for me barely breathing you barely there barely making it here. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We do talk a different language, men and women. That's one of the biggest problem with our ?? inner communications. Most men just lessen to just the black/white of most problems, not to how you feel about it, not to how it effects the two, only if it gets in the way of the next thought, do we take time to ponder about anything, that is most, not all. And when it comes to feelings of our ladies no, we or most just won't be bothered with it. If your not cut, burnt, blown up. Then it's not worth it, We just don't see that inside you are cut, burnt, and your heart is blown up. That's just the way most men are, and I think that most men will agree with me. So Get a clue? is that the game in the top shelve of the closet? love you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
SpitFire, enjoyed reading this poem. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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