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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
I wrote this for a friend way back in 1975. Wow, that was a while ago! It came out very quick and I didn't even try to edit it. Enjoy. Children Natural to grow Instinct to love Taught to learn Someone above War has destoyed life And also their pride People have shoved them And turned them aside Why does this happen? No one does know For as this goes on Half of them go |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Boardman~ Welcome!  I think this is a great poem.-SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hey Board, Children are what life's all about. Welcome to Dark Passions. I did a pieace on chilren about a month ago call "Vacient Eyes" I look forward to more post from you. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A brill first post Welcome to the darkness Welcome to my world Walter Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hello Sea, Joel and Walter, Thank you for the reply's and the kind words. I will be writting some new stuff soon! Have a great day! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Welcome to Passions! ~~nice writing~~ |
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honey007luv New Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 7 |
VERY, TOUCHING, I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH, GOOD WORK MY FELLOW POET |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This flows so nice, I wouldn't do a bit of editing either. Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Passions!!!! Loved this first post, children are the light and hope for the future!! Well done!! At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Danny, Honey, Joy and Isis, You guy's are all the greastest! I can see I will really enjoy hanging out here from time to time. I actually have another piece on the Passions regular site. It is called "My Angel" Check it out sometime, if you feel like it! Boardman |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Post here... I really liked reading this one...really waiting for more.. |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Dhuron, Thanks for the encouragement. I haven't had much free time lately, but I will! Boardman |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
What a thought provoking poem! Welcome and Merry Meet!  good luck with your writing, I know it can be hard at times... I've just dealt with a bout of writers block but wrote about it in open 7... hopefully its over! lol Cyndey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Boardman~ Welcome to the family of Passionate poets. Hope to see more intriguing work from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Children are everything! Welcome! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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