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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-09 10:04 PM


STIRRED TO

Ask.....

Who are you?
Who am I?
Who controls this?
Who am I looking for?
Who do I want?


What am I doing?
What is this leading too?
What is this lie?
What is left?
What now?


Where are you?
Where am I?
Where do I go from here?
Where will this lead?
Where is tomorrow?


Why do you persist?
Why do I respond?
Why do we go on?
Why is this so hard?
Why.....just WHY???????????


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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-10 02:46 AM


Why. We can only see the knots and ties and twist and turns, of the tapestry in life, not the finished product.
I have asked the same questions.
Some day I'm going to crawl through the damn thing and take a peek.
So Why? hell I don't know.
It just is.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

patricianne
Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66

2 posted 2000-05-10 01:31 PM


Ah, yes the eternal question. To which I can only say, Why not. Loved the poem.
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