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SpitFire
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0 posted 2000-05-08 07:58 PM


~Fix~

I only wanted to fix you
what was left of you
mend your soul
staple your smile back on
comb your hair
and make it all seem worth it again
was only trying to fix
everything he'd done
walk you to the table
sit you under the lights
educate the world
have you glow again
fix it all
fix you up to where you were before
before him and his ways
take it back
and fix things for you...........Momma.



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Isis
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1 posted 2000-05-08 08:04 PM


Spitfire, if this is real I'd send it to your Mom.  She'd treasure it and think you her hero.  I feel sorry for her, I felt her abuse etc.  Wonderful work..  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-05-08 08:05 PM


SpitFire~ how totally and completely touching. -SEA
SpitFire
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3 posted 2000-05-09 12:27 PM


~Thank you ladies for your kind words.    Isis,..perhaps I'll do that...but a hero, I doubt I am....but that was very sweet of you to say,..thanks for the heartfelt reply.
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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4 posted 2000-05-09 12:33 PM


To the heart my friend, I'd like to fix my parents also, but not possable.
I hope you have more sucess.
and I wish you the best.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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