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Veil_Gypsy
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail

0 posted 2000-05-08 08:32 AM


Breaking barriers of love and Lust,
Were the primal cry is so loudly heard
In the crowed reception that is my mind
I stand amidst the ruins of, what was once love and peace

My eyes blurry with fierce tears
Hands aching with scars and sores
To weak to carry the torture stake
Shall I stand here, and stand silent
I was waiting on the wind to work it out
I was waiting on some vision from above
They tell me the past will change
To bad I must wait till the future

Breaking though Barriers of myself
Crystal virgins danced in circles
They've all betrayed me for the serpents dance
I cry tumbling though my whirlwinds
Falling inside my blankets
I want to run away to the fields and lilypads, that made me safe
I can't go back there now, its some place damned to me

I was waiting on the past to work it out
I was hoping you knew the anwsers
I'm alone here in the museme that is my memeory

So I'll sit by,
At the party that never dies, we only have new ones
To welcome new fools wandering in
The Angels did dare to tread
So perhaps I should let the wounds heal,
I have to many, so many unseen to you!

I was waiting on you to work it out
I was hoping you would protect me,
I thought you were my shepherd and my stronghold
Only an open box, and open door
To let hell waltz in on!



 
The Exprerince of Survial is the key to the gravity of love
Enigma

Bard Gypsy


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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-08 07:08 PM


~Wow,...this post took me for a ride.  Right on,...wonderfully written.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-08 08:27 PM


A ride indeed!!  A journey of wonderful imagery, great work, be proud of this one!!!                           

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-09 01:12 AM


We do want a protector to do their jobs don't we.
A great poem.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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