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called suffering |
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Seysi New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 8kortrijk in belgium |
I dedicate this one to someone I love and hate at the same time... called suffering the hatred grows deep in me your fault probably you drove me insane with your eyes I hope your soul slowly dies i'm the suicidal mistress the one you use and throw away but I won't love you less the love grows deep in me my heart, your slave like i suffer i will behave you don't care you kill me some more i want you to adore the hatred lies on my tongue i'm weak, you're strong you fool, none of your tears are for me the one that you let suffer eternally the love dies deep in me |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
This one went straight to my heart. Oh how I know that feeling and confusion. I to have written a poem about this called "Every day". You could check it out if you like to. Anyway, great piece, it touched me to the core. Yours truly ~Broken~ "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before; But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token" ~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven" |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Gosh,...this was a potent post. Great work expressing. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Passions, I missed your first post, been away for a few days. So welcome now. really liked this piece, I know the feelings exactly you love em yet hate them, but I try really hard not to hate, bad Karma!!  Great work and expression A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It is a whirlwind at times, "love" very emotional, and heartfelt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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