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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I sit here far from your angelic touch < !signature-->You may not know it but you consume most of my thoughts Thoughts that distract me pull me down You have become the sister that mine never was Your soft voice beckons my heart, your gentle touch relaxes my soul You have not one drop of selfishness in your blood My emotions until lately, have always been free around you You see, I cannot calm anymore for I have come to a realization, I love you but cannot tell, you are worth more than that My selfish, lazy, ignorant, thoughtless soul is not worthy of you The devastation to what we have would be impeccable My heart would not go on if this dwindles in anyway So I will remain here sitting far from your angelic touch Frustrated I will kindly keep what I truly have to say With honor, I will protect you from the worst kind of evil I will protect you from myself There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed [This message has been edited by baerlon (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is a very large giving of yourself my friend. and a good way of putting it. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey bae, thanx for the sweet words and the read over in 7...thought Id see if ya posted over here. Glad I didnt miss this one... damn fine poem my friend. very well written and expresssed and most sincere. Though Id like to point out that your own words and devotion to this person, contradict and cancel out any thoughts of you being selfish. The fact that you wrote this amazing poem shows how unselfish you are where this person is concerned. hate to see ya sell your self short. Again, excellent poem. maybe you should show it to her? you know best. hope you keep writing... take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Doesn't JM always know what to say??? She's great huh?  ...this was a great post. You are huge to have done and written this act you speak of. Huge hearted,... |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thanks to all three of you for the imput. Nowadays any advice is good advice. JM i wish i could show this girl this peom but she means to much to and I could not bear it if she felt strange around. She is all that keeps my mind sane. Thanks again. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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