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Broken
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since 03-12-2000
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The woods


0 posted 05-07-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Broken   Email Broken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Broken

TIME

Dear God
Allow me to turn to nothing
For I wasn't meant to be
If I could change anything
I'd change about everything
Fighting battles in my mind
Doesn't get me anywhere
It doesn't make it better

And all the self-inflicted wounds
Seem to hurt more than before
The scars are beginning to show
I can feel their fingers point

My God I'm scared to death
You know I could really use some help
I'm to weak to help myself
I fear this time I won't make it through

You're all so strong, a vicious crowd
Laughing as you savour the sweetness of my agony
Why do you make it so hard?
Why not just kill me and get it done?

Oh well...
I knew the storm was getting closer
And I'm tired of living a lie
I'm sick of this life
I hate myself and I want to die
So take your knife
Tear a hole
Release my captured soul

Darkness, my home
Time has caught up
It's time to leave
It's time to go
I'm sorry






[This message has been edited by Broken (edited 05-07-2000).]
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SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 357
Illinois


1 posted 05-07-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

This is very sad and very deep...i hope that you can find some way to overcome these feelings. You've written the emotions out in an extroidinary way,and i really love this poem!!

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
SEA
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 24152
with you


2 posted 05-08-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Broken~ I hope you are ok, this is such a sad piece. -SEA
SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


3 posted 05-08-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Whoa,...that sounded like it HAD to come out.  Hope it made you feel atleast a little bit better. Hang in there....great conveyance of emotions to text.
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
Angels Camp


4 posted 05-09-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

HHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLLL
I can only howl to this, is very sad.
And I agree with spit this had to come out.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Dark Enchantress
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since 07-27-99
Posts 1460
meet Morgana


5 posted 05-09-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

It's been a while hasn't it my friend? Well I'm sorry but I have needed some time away from the forums and from a few other things aswell. Maybe I'll start visiting more...I don't know yet....but I just wanted to tell you that this was a truly excellent poem and a very good expression of your feelings....they sound so much like my own. As always, it has been a pleasure reading your words.

                     Yours truly,
                        Angel


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Strosek
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since 04-08-2000
Posts 60
Fourways, Gauteng, South Afric


6 posted 05-10-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Strosek   Email Strosek   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Strosek's Home Page   View IP for Strosek

wow, great poem, really expresses your feelings, I've been there man, not a pleasent place, but life has a way of showing another side of situations, Hope things get better.
Broken
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since 03-12-2000
Posts 272
The woods


7 posted 05-11-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Broken   Email Broken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken



Sw.~ Thank you for your kind words, I'll keep an eye out for your poems.  

Sea~ Yeah I'm okay, somewhat damaged, but okay. Thanks for asking by the way.  

Spitfire~ You're right, it had to come out. And yes, getting replies to my poems always makes me feel a bit better. Take care  

Joel~ HHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWLLLL!!  

Strosek~ Thanks for your concern, and I do feel better now. Thank you  

D.E~ Yes it has been a while my friend, and I to have been away for a while, this is my second post in about 3 weeks I belive. But I've been missing you anyway, and I'm glad you're back. Take care, my friend in the dark. ~Broken~



 "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token"
~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven"

Broken
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Posts 272
The woods


8 posted 05-11-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Broken   Email Broken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken



Sw.~ Thank you for your kind words, I'll keep an eye out for your poems.  

Sea~ Yeah I'm okay, somewhat damaged, but okay. Thanks for asking by the way.  

Spitfire~ You're right, it had to come out. And yes, getting replies to my poems always makes me feel a bit better. Take care  

Joel~ HHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWLLLL!!  

Strosek~ Thanks for your concern, and I do feel better now. Thank you  

D.E~ Yes it has been a while my friend, and I to have been away for a while, this is my second post in about 3 weeks I belive. But I've been missing you anyway, and I'm glad you're back. Take care, my friend in the dark. ~Broken~  



 "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token"
~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven"

topsyturveychick
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since 01-19-2003
Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus


9 posted 06-18-2003 01:27 AM       View Profile for topsyturveychick   Email topsyturveychick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for topsyturveychick

I'm reading all of ur poems..U have a great way of writting..and even though I myself arn't going through depression...I want to be a pychologist when I'm older and it intregues me to read all of ur poems...I think they're great.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

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