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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Giddy lifted colors brighter mind clear smell the night out of purposeless coma FIGHT eyes alive draw in the air head held high sound of your own laughter to the heavens fly finally alive spells are broken slapped by the hand of life no warnings spoken good to be alive again [This message has been edited by NamelessOne (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Powerful post,...it IS like that at times eh? I like this....sounds like a great feeling. Well said!!!  |
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nathan New Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 6colorado springs, CO |
wow--great work, captivating to the end...Carpe Diem!! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I liked this one a lot. Powerful! mm |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sounds like someone had a brush with Mr. death? "purposeless coma" The colors are brighter, the mind becomes clear with life, the smells are so much more. The eye's are better, and the air smells great with life also. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nameless~ sounds almost like leaving a bad relationship, at any rate- fantastic! -SEA |
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