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Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-05-06 02:20 PM



   I've finally lost her,
there is no tomorrow for us
there's only darkness now.
   I will forever miss you.
I haven't said good-bye nor
will I.
   I will hold the bitterness
within like always.
   I never said I loved you
because you've changed.
   Good-bye my love.....

© Copyright 2000 Kurly - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-06 02:33 PM


~Ouch,...are you ok hun?  Let it out here...it helps atleast a little.  This post was very heartfelt...like you are going through it RIGHT NOW...I'm sorry.
Evilkat88
Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37

2 posted 2000-05-06 05:09 PM


I so know what you are saying. I have one of those relationships and it suchs.But sometimes the you need to say good bye. The best way to hold on is to let go.
                  Blessed Be
                     Kat

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-05-07 12:32 PM


Kurly~
sorry you are hurting right now. I felt the pain in this and eventually it will ease but it will take awhile.
HUG
Tracie~

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-05-07 01:05 AM


Very moving my friend.
I'll howl for you tonight.
and for her, for the loss.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

5 posted 2000-05-07 02:31 AM


My goodness,
This one crosses boundries I dare not wish to imagine.  
This reading has left me with teardrops ..
And my heart just seemed
To grasp the feelings you shared on screen.
CocoBaci

Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

6 posted 2000-05-07 07:13 AM


Dear Poets,
SpitFire- yes this is going on now just recently in fact.
  Thank you all for your comments.

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