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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia

0 posted 2000-05-05 11:23 PM


When the rain falls it lands tenderly upon the shore
When the waves roll in they reveal memories galore

Rain, seawater and the sand make me feel at peace inside
They help to wash my thoughts of you away with the tide

Thoughts of you and I alone on a beach one perfect night
Alone and in love holding each other tight

But now I'm all alone you've gone to a higher place
And in my heart I'm broken and our love I'll not replace

You were my one and only no other could there be
So here I am alone let the water set me free


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-05 11:54 PM


Tracie..this is so perfect...
so tender and sweetly sad...
this is one of my favs by you.
I know this pain...and oh if only the waves could wash it away...
time does...and writing it out like this.
perfection here.


 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
--------------
I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-06 11:53 AM


~Tracie,...this is so great....I've been on that wave as well....sort of taking to the ocean to help with some things....I loved it.
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-05-07 12:08 PM


Janet Marie~
You have said so much here and I thank you, so glad it's one of your favs  
Funny how water is so calming whether it be the rain, ocean or a cool running stream it tends to calm and ease.
Thanks for your warm reply.
Tracie~

Spitfire~
Thank you for your wonderful reply and take care  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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