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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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fare thee not upon my shore leave me here upon death's door I want not for mortal gifts e'er to ease, my heart rifts gently now I lay to rest fold my hands upon my breast slumber comes in angry waves all for you have I gave cast me into darkest night ne'er to see sweet morn light lift me not from my despair show me not that you care it matters little that you give for I struggle e'er to live lay me down among the blooms let my soul peruse the gloom call me not into the day this my word, my final say |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!!! Now this is what I would call "Dark." Excellent tho and very vivid! Peace I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
very vivid indeed. a great "dark" poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Wow....now this one would make a wonderful epiteth. Have you considered selling this one to a headstone engraver? Alicat |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Another WOW from me, very powerful stuff.  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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